Alright, so my review is more on the quality of the vocals more than anything else. I've been listening to punk for a LONG time. How long? 17 years. Is that enough to give a decent review? I hope so. Overall I enjoyed the song, as a punk song, it contained the elements of the typical punk song and the nature of the vocals followed as such. However, a recording of a song is very different than the same song to the live human ear. My criticism lies in the recording of the vocals. Perhaps even the mastering of the vocals. A tiny bit louder and a lot clearer than the rest of the band, the vocals should be. (a little yoda like eh?)
I dont know your recording situation, and this isnt flippin rollin stone, so I understand there might be obstacles in achieving such a thing.
Overall great piece. I'm curious as to you're presence in the band. Seeeing as how you say..."this is one of my bands."
Keep up the good music dude!